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Wednesday, August 14, 2019

today Kauri class done some writing on our commas. Kauri class finished of a story with a story starter

of a boy and his uncle fishing for dinner and Pua the boy cough a pirate ship




2p Me, and uncle were floating in the in
the water not knowing what to do.so
we started swimming north back to
the village .After four hours of
swimming we finally got back to shore.
The hole village was worried about us.
The first word that we said  when we
got back was WATER.everybody was
asking me what I was holding in my
hand I said it was a sharp macetty,
But it was actually a sword.one hour
later a hole bunch of treasure washed
up on shore everybody was so
confused.Meanwhile all the treasure
had being taken up to the village.
”eventually” THE KRAKEN,
dun dun duuuun  came flying out
of no ware.
the kraken, dun dun duuun  took
all there treasure dun dun duuun .
now that all the treasure is gone
enclouding my sword. and, then all
of a sudden a shiny, box of treasure
washed up on shore.the hole village
was amazed and happy.just ten minutes
later the KRAKEN, washed up on shore
DEAD.late at night a groop of rich pirates
took the KRAKEN, into the jungle and
threw the KRAKEN, into a volcano.
when the rich pirates got back to the
beach they couldn't seem to find there
ship because pua pulled the anchor up
and jumped off the boat. The next day
the pirates came to the village to see if
they new ware there pirate ship is 
99.99% said no, buuuuut pua said
yaaaaaa i doo. The pirates said what
to pua, but he said no haven't seen it so
they walked away.